Haiku 1


Sit in the stillness
of a thousand reflections –
A blaze in your eye

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3 thoughts on “Haiku 1

  1. check this: you’ll like it.

    [I] sit in the stillness
    of a [thousand] reflections
    a [1] blaze in your eye

    one thousand and one.

    i deconstructed you to reveal that you are sheherzade

  2. You are brilliant! I’m going to be thinking about this for a while. Not only do you reveal Sheherzade (would that I could save myself by storytelling!) but by adding the first person pronoun it is no longer the reflections becoming a blaze in the eye of the sitter, but the sitter who becomes a blaze in the Eye of You, the Beloved! So Lover and Beloved reflect each other!

  3. You are brilliant! I’m going to be thinking about this for a while. Not only do you reveal Sheherzade (would that I could save myself by storytelling!) but by adding the first person pronoun it is no longer the reflections becoming a blaze in the eye of the sitter, but the sitter who becomes a blaze in the Eye of You, the Beloved! So Lover and Beloved reflect each other!

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